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People
have divided opinions on the idea of accepting a bad situation. Some argue that
it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage
of money. Others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations. (가급적이면 논제의 표현을 그대로 긁어오지 마시고, 나만의 표현으로 재창조해주세요~) In
my opinion, the latter is more persuasive.
On
the one hand, when someone is in bad situation it is better to just accept the situation. In a situation that someone can’t cannot (줄임말 사용을 지양해주세요~이는 뒤에도 마찬가지입니다.) control oneself and just complain
and don’t like that situation, it will cause more stress, whereas situation is not changed/will not be changed do
not change. Also if someone is do not satisfied about a job so wants wanted to move to
another job, it is not guaranteed that he or she could find a someone could find better job. It is
better to find good things in the current situation.
On
the other hand, I believe that if someone is in bad situation (여기에 대해서는 총평에서 링크를 하나 넣어드리겠습니다.), it is better to
try and improve that bad situation. Although someone is in bad situation now
such as got unsatisfactory job or shortage of money, it could be improved if he or she I
works hard. Plus, if you do not try to improve bad situation and just stay in
bad situation, you may regret this choice later. (가급적이면 2인칭 사용을 자제해주세요. 단, 5점대 이하를 목표로 하신다면 여기에 신경쓰실 필요는 없습니다.)
In conclusion I believe that when someone is in bad situation, if
working hard and try to improve situations, you could make bad situations to
good situations. (인칭 통일이 필요합니다.)
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