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There is disagreement regarding the issue of whether the government should sometimes infringe on people’s freedom for the social security. The main point of contention is related to the appropriateness of government’s right to intervene in intervention about people’s behavior. Personally But personally, I believe that this intervention on people’s freedom should be prohibited because the freedom of citizens is more valuable than social safety. In most case, infringing on civil freedom should be prohibited because it can lead to more positive outcomes. This is because Because, people can not dream and achieve what they want in the harshly regulated society. For example, compared comparing to any western countries, Koreans tend to choose a more stable job rather than following what their hearts want. This is quite a miserable situation which comes from harsh regulation of society. However, if the government allows people to do what they really want, the society can makes more postive conclustions, making a healthy society. In contrast, it is also true that allowing the government to limit people’s freedom can help to maintain a safe society. This is because the appropriate intervention of governments can prevent the social confusion. For example, while the dangerous virus spread into the socity - like corona virus - some citizen can insist to not wearing masks (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.). In this situation, as the government can infringe on their freedom, they can limit someone’s selfish actions and make more safe socity for the others. As a result, lots of citizens can feel comfortable and don’t (줄임말은 풀어써주셔야 합니다.) have to be worried worry about any serious situations. This shows that limiting on people can increase the saferty of society, at some points. In conclusion, infringing on the freedoms of citizens is a controversial topic because there are opinions that support and oppose this basic idea. However, I personally believe that the government shoud not infringe on the rights of citizens unless it’s a necessary situation.
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