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With the development of science, the quality of life style has been improving. However, the public think that the advanced technologies lead to new issue, which cannot solve them->be solved. I agree with the given statement because we often heard of the genetic issues and nuclear problems. In this essay, I will discuss my opinion in detail with several examples.
To begin with, it is true that, thanks to development of science and technology, the quality of our lives->life has been enhancing->enhanced dramatically. For instance, we encountered both food shortage and energy depletion. Nevertheless, with the growth of genetic engineering, we can have abundance food such as genetic modified beans or corns. In addition, developing technology of nuclear energy leads to cheap and clean energy. However, as we know, there are fatal problems with this(genetic engineering).
First of all, the genetic changed foods have several problems. Since the foods were made synthetically, we cannot sure the safety of them. They could not only affect our health negatively but also destroy life cycle of nature.
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As to the second example, the progress of nuclear technology triggers nuclear weapon and radioactivity’s threat. Nuclear weapon is the strongest ones in the world. Therefore, if some countries attack another country with the weapon, the attacked country’s living things such as animals, plants and people will disappear at once. Also, if the nuclear power plants are damaged, the radioactivity will affect people’s health negatively, even it will lead to death and also affecting next generations’ with harmful effects.
In conclusion, as I mentioned above, with the advance of science, serious problems were can be created such as genetic modified food’s insecurity and nuclear threatening(threat). We should make efforts to find these issue’s resolutions.
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