Initially, university education was for people who have a passion in for their study. As most of them became professors or devoted themselves into the society. Getting a job was the latter concern to them. Thus, people who want a job went to commercial high schools. However, as almost all of students go to a university, their initial objective has been lost. As a result, nowadays many people in nowadays believe the main aim for university education is to help graduates (to) find better jobs. * passion 은 불가산 같아보이는 가산명사 have a passion for ~
First and foremost, as most students go to a university 1.for certain jobs which require degrees, 2.they are desperately in short. Their assertion is understandable as because university education is for the future of college students. After the global recession, many people lost their job, and once they lost the job, they realised that 3.without degrees, it is almost impossible to get another job. 4.This sad trend grew the argument: universities are for gaining better jobs.
1. students go to a university to get high quality jobs which require special knowlege and a university degree.
2. they are desperate. In short, their assertion ~
3. it is almost impossible to get another job without a university degree.
4. This trend supports the argument that students go to a university to get a better job.
However, some people believe that university education has wider /a variety of benefits for individuals and society. This belief was the original objective of the university. Most graduates became professors to teach young students, and others devoted themselves into the society. Researching for developing technologies and progressing their field's study for benefits of humankind. 이문장은 동사가 없네요.
I personally believe agree with the latter belief ideologically, but in reality, university education is for the future of college students. No one wants to become a beggar, everyone wants to become rich and famous. Sadly, that motivates most people to get into universities. I, therefore, am with the latter assertion.
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