In industrialized society, the development of technology have has led to convenient human life. However, the envrionmental pollution have has resulted from the use of technology and it becomes a global issue. Regarding this, although the government has considered this problem, the trial to solve these difficulties has shown little. This essay will state the reason and the solution for the problem.
1. 수일치는 아실거고, regarding 은 about의 뜻이긴 하지만 저렇게 문두로 빼서 쓰지 않습니다.
이럴땐 when it comes to the matter 가 좋겠군요. 아니면 뒤에 this problem 이 또 있으니까 빼 버리는 것도 좋겠네요.
2. they have hardly taken any steps to solve this problem. 가 자연스럽겠죠. 문제도 환경문제 하나네요.
Although the pollution is getting severe, many people haven't considered is as a critical problem and known what to do. The research conducted by Korea University shows that the 70% of the respondents said that they have already known the polluted earth but have no idea to deal with it. Moreover, the reduced short knowledge of adults would be continued to be transferred to their children. Then, it could be the vicious cycle. Therefore, recently, the promotion of the method to save the earth would be needed.
3. many people have not considered this matter a critical problem, and they do not know what to do.
4. they have already known the pollution of the earth.
5. recently 가 있으므로 현재 완료나 과거.
A method to save the earth has been needed.
6. In order to minimize environmental problem, the government's action would be essential. For example, government should create the advertisement contained the ways to save the earth as well as the environmental problems. In addition, educational trial is also vital. From school education, the class for the method to protect the environment should be suggested, then children would be aware of the conservation of the earth, becoming adults. Therfore, through with the government's action and educational program, changing the people's perception would be crucial.
6. The government (definitely) shoud take action to minimize the environmental problem.
7. people need to learn how to protect the envirnomnet.
To sum up, to solve the environmental problems, it is important not only to understand the problem but also to teach the method of protecting earth. Regarding this, the government should promote the way to save the earth and also, from school, the class for protecting environment should be held.
8. , and people are also required to take a class to learn about protecting the environment (from school.)
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