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Advanced technologies have made human life more comfortable. There are advantages and disadvantages to human being. Describe the pros and cons.
Great changes have taken place in human society along development of technologies, our life style have totally changed when we are working, studying, playing exercise and even sleeping, every moment we use modern technologies. It provides convenient and efficiency for people to their works. Nevertheless, modern technologies have a couple of cons as well. In this essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of advanced technologies.
There are several pros in development of technologies. First of all, people do not need to do dangerous works, many kinds of machines can substitute the dangerous human’s work, such as, excavating ground, elevating materials upward, especially, many kinds of machines used in construction sites. Second of all, the technologies help disabled people to move or do a lot of activities. For instance, moving with wheel chairs, griping object with artificial hands and computer typewriter for whole body paralyzed patients. As you can see, advanced technologies give not only convenient and safe work environments for workers but also many hopes for disabled people as well as patients.
On the other hand, the modern technologies have a few side effects as well. Firstly, today, people heavily rely of technologies. The banks, governments and schools are enormously depending on computers and networking technologies. In advanced countries’ almost citizen have a identity and accounts, that of information stored in computer system, yet, if the main computer are attacked by fatal virus, the society would may have numerous damage and into a chaos. Secondly, nowadays, some people will lose their health, we can see quite a few obesity people. Since, many apparatuses substitute human’s work, people are getting lazy and lack of exercise, which can be caused of obesity. Therefore, technologies have negative aspect as well.