I definitely agree with that advanced technologies have changed human life a lot, and apparently induced made human life to be comfortable. Nevertheless, there coexist the pros and cons related to the advance of technologies.
First, there are indefinately lots of advantages caused / created by the advance of technologies. Today, it is acceptable that people do not maintain their life without a car or other public transportations(불가산) such as a boat, train or airplane. Thanks to the advents(보통단수) in of new transportation system, people could must have been extending de their range of movement and significantly reducing ed the round trip time. In addition, several electronical appliances in a kitchen have helped us (to) eat more fresher, healthier foods and reduced the time consumption taken in on cleaning clothes and in washing dishes. Thus, no one denies the statement that the advance of technologies have has significantly contributed to making make human life to be comfortable.
In spite of the pros of advanced technologies, there are also disadvantages due to the its rapid change advance of technologies in human life. Whoever lives today Nowadays people has have to understand and learn the advanced technologies to communicate with others. In modern societies, most people exchange their messages through the Internet. To maintain the relationship with others, though people do not want to use it, they should keep up with the advance of technologies. Otherwise, they are isolated from others,(,없이) even if they do not intend. may be 정도가 좋을듯합니다.
In conclusion, the advance of techonologies have has contributed to human life by improving the quality of their life and making them feel comfortable. to step up and to be comfortable. However, * there apparently coexist pros and cons caused by it. Therefore, 1.human being should not adopt new technology without doubt and need to reflect the consequence in advance.
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However, there are disadvantages of advanced technologies as well.
1. There is no doubt that human being should not adopt new technology carelessly, and we need to expect its consequence in advance.
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