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Today, the high sales of popular consumer good reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, there are a lot of advertisements on the streets and on television. Some people believe that advertising boosts sales of goods and people are affected by advertisements to buy unnecessarily. This essay will discuss why I disagree that advertisements negative affect consumers.
In my country, many advertising companies produce advertisements with famous singers or celebrities. As a result of it, people want to buy the goods. Especially youngster, they want to purchase the goods which were advertised with their favorite stars, even if they actually do not need it. Moreover, goods look more gorgeous and good quality. Actually, advertising producers do not show the goods downsides in the advertisements and show only strong points. Many consumers are allured and buy goods without enough consideration. In addition, toy sales market is very sensitive since children do not have enough ability to control themselves. Thus, they can be easily tempted by advertisements.
On the other hand, there are various aspects against these arguments. People usually have their own spending habits and standards. Normally, individuals cannot easily swayed by just advertisements. Furthermore, some people like rather advertising since it gives information that newly arrived goods and trends.
In conclusion, people simply think that advertisements make people to buy goods impulsively and ruin consumer’s buying habits. However I think ordinary people have enough ability to control their craving for buying new goods, and they are not taken in easily by commercials.