Your Answer ▼ Some people argue History in one of the most important school subjects. On the other hand, other people seem to disagree as they think Science ans Technology are more important in nowadays. As I understand both opinions, let me think about the (구어체이므로 수정해주시는 게 좋습니다. 나한테 ~~하게 해줘~~라는 식으로 서술되어있죠.) importance of these subjects.
It is true that Science and Technology (조금 심화된 내용이긴 하지만 말씀드리자면, 과학/기술/역사를 작성할 때, 이게 학교의 과목으로써의 의미를 가지면, 고유명사가 아님에도 불구하고 대문자 시작이 가능은 합니다. 그러나, 반대로 일반적인 학문으로써의 역사의 의미로 작성되면 무조건 소문자 시작이고요. 여기의 경우 후자에 해당하므로 소문자 시작입니다. 단, 이걸 일일히 구분하기 어렵겠다 싶으면 모조리 소문자 시작해주시면 됩니다. 대문자로 시작할 경우 틀릴 가능성도 있지만, 소문자 시작은 틀릴 일이 없어요~) are becoming more and more important today. Science makes our daily life convenient and comfortable. It can promote our productivity in the industries. As they are developing rapidly, it is essencial essential to learn them when we are getting a job or living a daily life. The the recent technologies are used in our normal daily life such as tacking a bus, calling friends, paying in the market (표시된 이 부분의 경우 '기술' 이 아닌 '행위' 입니다. 기술에 대한 서술을 해주세요~). In my experience, my mother who was not able to use an e-ticket had had trouble on the bus. Furthermore, most company request ability to use recent software most companies request the ability to use recent softwares to their job applicants.
On the other hand, we cannot underestimate the importance of History. One famous scholar said that History always repeats itself happen again. It means that we can learn from History and prepare the future from learning History. There are many features in History that our grandfathers had experienced. Such such as solving problems, reasons for certain consequences, particular behaviors to some dangers. We can learn from them and apply it to the problems of the present use it in these day`s problem. Besides, we can promote our confidence by learning History. The great historical buildings, wonderful classical musics, the great achievement, these make ourself confident as their sons. Therefore, I think History will still important subject in the future. (미래에 어떨지에 대해서는 논의의 여부가 아닙니다.)
In conclusion, ther they (참고로, 문단에 처음 등장하는 대상을 대명사로 작성해서는 안 됩니다.) are both important subject. We cannot say one is more important than other especially as a subject in school. In my opinion, students must learn all of them. |