Your Answer ▼Some believe that people have a more special bond with each other in this modern society, however, others feel that this world brings individuals to have more independency on social relations. I personally think that people are more inclined to have their personal space because of the modernization.
To begin with, it is true that people are spending most of their time interacting with others compared to time spend spent at home by themselves. This is because they have social relationships on their school or work, and family and friends are the most influence in life and they make people feel relaxed and protected. Furthermore, Most most companies are really care about who is a team-player when they are hiring hire employees. This is because Because people who can complete the missions with other people can handle any other difficulties individually as well. This possibly shows that by working with others can make better results and improvements. Not only workplaces but also other places people could have long-term satisfaction by helping each other. (부연 설명이 없는 근거는 그냥 안 적는 게 낫습니다.)
However, with an advent of technology, people are facing individual challenges and tasks since the use of computers and other devices has been rapidly increasing. By using internet, people can work or study at home. When they need other’s assistance, they can look for some information and knowledge from internet or a variety of books. For those reasons, people tend to work on something on their own without anyone’s help. It could make people less considerate and self-centred mainly because they are not used to interacting with other people.
In conclusion, it is apparent that building close relationships with other people is necessary for society members. However, people feel that they are more likely to focus on their personal projects because of the technology that they use on everyday life. (위에서 했던 말을 요약하는 게 아니라, 내가 어떻게 생각하는지를 적어주세요!) |