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A The number of automobiles, without doubt, has significantly risen during thirty
years period throughout the world, which would involve massive traffic
congestion in several major cities throughout the nations. (여기서 엔터 치지 않습니다. 그냥 하나의 문단으로 쭉 이어주세요~이것도 점수에 들어가는 사항 중 하나입니다.)
Nevertheless,
this issues can be solved, by imposing a more convenient and efficient public transportation system in relevant places.
It
is undeniable that advanced countries have indicated a remarkable increase in the number of vehicles. Furthermore, a great many recent surveys suggest how much
they are suffered by traffic congestion in big cities such as New York,
London, Paris. In effect, a majority of developed countries are introducing
measures for shrinking the amount of car used like a car-pool system. (여기는 해결책 관련 내용을 다루고 있기 때문에, 밑의 문단으로 가야 합니다. 그리고 안 그래도 비중 차이가 많이 나는데, 이 경우 더 벌어지기 때문에 문단 비중 조절이 필요하고요.)
However,
there are solutions to this problem. One of the ways to deal with traffic jams is establishing a wide array of and plenty of useful transportations not only in
big cities but also in small cities. It could be the case that a large number of
those who live in the suburb have a job into the major cities, whose may seem to
take at least around an hour to get to work by car. The high price of lands and
dense population make them stay in long-distance areas from the urban area. It
would seem that there are not commonly existed train or bus stations move to
the downtown. (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) It could be argued that it makes individuals normally utilising utilize a car. Research suggests many a arrange of transportation systems are able to
help to resolve traffic congestion in rush-hour. Take a good example of one of
the big cities in the world, Busan, has shown remarkable resolving the traffic
issue, by placing numerous train stations in the suburbs around the Busan.
In
conclusions, it is apparent that there have had tremendous a number of cars'
increasing. Nevertheless, it may be
possible that it can be solved to implement better public transportation system
in many places by governments. |