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It is a common belief that importing fruits and vegetables from other countries have some benefits, such as enabling people to can try a wide range of agricultural products. However, there is a more persuasive argument that buying domestic products has a more beneficial effect on individuals and the local community.
On the one hand, a majority of people think the products from overseas has more positive sides. By purchasing imported products, it makes people experience exotic fruits that they couldn't (줄임말 사용은 가급적이면 지양해주세요!) eat in their own countries. Since many countries have their own condition depends depending on soil or weather, they cannot have all kinds of farm products. (이 문장이랑, by 로 시작하는 문장은 순서가 바뀌어야 합니다. 먼저 모든 종류의 과일을 기를 수 없다는 단점을 언급한 뒤, 이 단점을 수입이라는 과정을 통해 강조하고, 바로 뒤의 대한민국의 예시를 통해 이를 보충하는 거죠. 논리적인 연결 흐름을 고려했을 때, 이쪽이 3배는 더 자연스럽고, CC점수에도 영향을 주므로 꼭 수정해주세요~) For example, in South Korea, thanks to the development of trades, it enabled Koreans them to try fruits like bananas, kiwifruits, and avocado. In addition, some countries can cultivate a massive amount of fruits and naturally, the price of the products very cheap compared to the local fruit. (이걸 굳이 살리실 거면, 여기에 추가적인 설명이 필요합니다. 저렴한 가격이 누구에게, 혹은 어떻게 도움이 되는지 등으로요.)
Nevertheless, I support the idea that people have to consume more on local foods. Spending on domestic fruits and vegetables will allow people to buy relatively fresh products. Since the local products do not need to be traveled far way before coming to the table, they are much fresher than an imported one. It is apparent that when the agricultural products come from overseas, they need to be on the ship or plane, which definitely generates a great amount of pollution (pollution 말고 더 적절한 단어가 있는데...저도 갑자기 생각이 안 나네요ㅜㅜ). There is one more advantage of consuming domestic products, by consuming the native products, in that it can support local farmers and the whole domestic agricultural industry. It is the obvious fact that instead of buying cheap imported products, helping the local community will be also giving a positive effect on the national economy.
To sum up, the majority of people agree with purchasing the products from oversea has a positive effect, but I believe buying our local fruits and vegetables has more benefits, which people can enjoy fresh foods as well as helping the local community. |