▶ Your Answer :
Through the years, media technology of media has been developed
significantllysignificantly so
nowadays, . Thus, people can seefind
advertisement everywhere like on TV, radio, and newspaper. Some
people believe that advertisement is beneficial, while others think that it has
many drawbacks in thesedays.
There are several negative influences of advertisement (Ad).
Ad's main
reason for companyThe reason why companies advertise is to earn
more money through itthe ads. Therefore
there are incentives for companies to us bad tactics just to make
more money. They might If it leads to wrong way such as
cheat to customers by giving about productwrong
information
on their products or and give the
only merits of them information bombastically for just their
merits. SpecificallyEspecially, when children
or teenagers
who do not have enough discernment knowledgeknowledge and
experiences , when they watch those attractive commercial with advertisement
including use famous singer or actor, they would end up and consuming unhealthy
junk food which
looksing like delicious though. It can mislead
to young consumers. Moreover, Last but not least, cost of advertisement
is usually
very expensive, so it usually increases the price of
advertised products. Between advertisement cost and product price have
strong relevant..
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On the other hand, since the original purpose of
advertisement is to give informantion about product, and help customers to make
better choices by consumers, . without such
advertisementsIf we cannot watch the advertisement easily like
just watch TV or read newspaper, we have to spend extra time
to find information ofabout the products we are going
to buy. Moreover, sometimes we can get products cheaper than their usual
prices
through the promotion. Such chance would not be easily found if there is
no ad. We cannot approch easily, if ad is not developed.
좋은점으로 정보를 준다는 것 밖에 없음.. 한두개 더 필요
예를 들어 TV 등에 광고를 할 수 있을 정도의 기업 제품이라면 신뢰할 수 있다 등..
Although, the arguments for advertisement have good
influences on socienty is strong, the negative aspects far outweigh than
postives. As far as I am concerned, today's advertisement is almost exaggerate
the facts. To solve these problem, government should control the ad industry
and company have to consider about their conscience.
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