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The internet is has already become a part of our life.
Most of people using the internet think it is the greatest invention in the 20th century. On the other hand, most
of parents of young children are worrying about their children being exposed to unfiltered information from the
internet. In this essay, I will talk about the pros and cons of the internet.
Firstly, there are lots of advantages
of using the internet. As the concept of its invention, all people can share
most of information through the internet. Most of Knowledge, from cooking recipes to
academic articles, is being shared in the internet. This changed our life a
lot. We used to go to library to find some information, and go to some special
institution to learn specific skills. We, however, can get these information
and education at home through the internet. People who are living in the
country used to go to the big city to get information and education. However, they do not need to go
anywhere for them. They can get that information and be educated at their home
in the country over the internet. Another advantage is that people who are
talented can become famous easier than before. We used
to watch talent people only on the TV because it was the only way to broadcast
to people. However, we can show our talent to over the world if we have
a camera and the internet. These are very huge changes in our lives in a good way. People can share more
information, have
more chance to be educated and more
chance to be famous, equally.
Of course, there is a bad side of
using the internet. All internet
users are exposed to any information. Therefore, young children can approach to
the adult and violent sites without any filtering. This is the concern of most of
parents. Not only the young, but also adult who cannot control and manage
themselves may be easily addicted to use the internet. There are already many
films made to warn the problem of internet, imaginary life in on-line, missing
of off-line life, etc.
In conclusion, the internet could be either the
best invention or the worst, and it is totally depending on how to use it. We
should try to use this great invention in a
good way and teach our children how to use this.
The young are amateur, so they may need our supervision. As the property of the
internet, there are no other ways to control the internet users, but we should
control by ourselves with education and supervision.
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