The pie chart shows the changes in student enrolment in year 1980, and 2000. In 1980, most of the enrollment that was made was mostly bachelor’s degree, followed by associate degree, and master’s degree. However in 2000, popularity of bachelor’s degree went down significantly, and other degrees showed an increase of their percentage.
To look at the graph more closely, in 1980, Bachelor’s degree was the largest group within 4, with 76% of enrollment. Second popular group was Associate degree, showing 13%. Next, Master’s degree was the third largest group, having 9% overall. Finally, Doctoral degree took the smallest amount of percentage, remaining only 2%.
Next graph in 2000, surprisingly, it is noticeable that Bachelor’s degree fell down to 42%. In case of Master’s degree, unlike Bachelor’s, it showed a dramatic increase almost up to 35%, which is about 4 times higher than back in 1980. Then the third place was followed by Associate degree, having 18% in total. Just like 1980, Doctoral degree was lowest of all, but it rose up to 5%, which is a 2.5 times higher than it was in 1980.
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