목표 7.0
The graph below shows the average daily spend of three categories of international visitor to New Zealand from 1997 to 2017.
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The line graph compares three groups of travellers in terms of average money each visitor spent daily in New Zealand between 1997 and 2017.
Overall, the average
amounts of daily spending by business, holiday and visiting friends/relatives (항목명은 웬만하면 그대로 두시는 게 좋습니다.) freinds/famillies
groups increased from 1997 to 2003, and decreased rapidly from 2003 to 2005.
The graph shows relatively smaller changes between 2004 and 2017.
In 1997, business visitors spent the most money, at $255 per person on average, while visiting friends or relatives group spent the least, at $115 per person. Holiday visitors spent about the median amount of the other two groups at about $190 each on average. All three groups' average daily spend increased until 2003, but dropped rapidly from 2003 to 2005. In 2004 business group spent less than holiday group on average for the first time since 1997.
From 2004 to 2017 business and holiday group's spending showed a fluctuation, ranging from 140 to 260 dollars per person. Holiday visitors spent about $250 in 2017, which is $40 more than the amount spent by business travellers. Visiting friends group consistently spent the lowest in the 20 years period.
총평: (8/7/7/7) 7.5
실전에서도 이정도만 쓰시면 전혀 걱정 없을 겁니다. 위에 말씀드렸듯이 항목명 자체는 패러프레이징하다가 큰일나는 경우가 있으므로 주의해주시고요. 수고하셨습니다 :)