The two pie charts show the population of South Korea population in the past and how it is expected to change in the future, by four age groups
Overall, it can be seen that the two middle age groups have been accounting for the majority of the population by 2050 while the oldest and youngest age groups have experienced and will go through significant changes.
In 2000, the biggest portion of the population was adults between 40 and 59 years old (42%), and the smallest percentage was seen at only 10% of the total regarding people over 60 years old, followed by the percentage of people from 0 to 19 years old as 15%. It is notable that the combined percentage of oldest and youngest was 25%, which was smaller than the population of adults between 20 and 39 years old (33%). by 8%. 괄호 써서 수치를 자주 쓰는건 감점요인이라고 말씀해주셨었는데 해당문장에서 괄호대신 by 8% 넣어서 이만큼 차이가 난다라고 표현할수있을까요?
In regard 2050 figure, it is noteworthy that the two largest portion age groups ( 40~59 and 20~39 years old) are expected to maintain its high position equally by 2050, accounting for 45% and 29% of the whole population, respectively. In addition, people between 0 and 19 years old will fall by half from 15% to 7% while the oldest age group over 60 years old will double to 19%.
..전체적으로 시도를 많이해본거 같습니다 느끼기엔 전반적으로 많이 실수한거같은데요.. 특히 진한부분은 더 확신이 안서네용.. 감사합니다! |