Everything is processed from the past through the present and the future. People like archeologists, respect the past and consider whether the present and future no longer exist without the past. And I am also concerned what effects would be passed on to our children who do not care about the past.
People such as archeologists, believe that the future is the consequences of the past. And they sometimes look back into the past in order to find a key to make their modern life better. Also they learn the lessons for the life. However, most people in the current era, continue to neglect the importance of the past. They are always subject to restraint of pursuing at beneficial things to themselves. And this selfish action could be destructive of the value of the past.
In addition, it is an urgent for our children to realize the importance of the past. They need to be recognized and known the value of the past because the past indicates us to be heading to where we should go. Also children should be able know their origin. It helps grow up a love of the family and even the country.
In conclusion, a development and innovation seem to be the only the key to survive this world. However, when encountering the hardest moment you feel, it would be good to pause everything for a second and think back the past, you might see the dim light from the cave. Last thing for our children, at school or even at home, adults should educate the significance of the past and realize them to concern with that. (271 words)
제가 주제에 관해서 아이디어를 확실히 이해했는지 문법적인거 단어선정의 문제 자세히 첨삭 바랍니다. 많은 태클 기대 하겠습니다^^ |