■ You should spend about 40 minutes on this task ■ Present a written argument or case to an educated reader no special knowledge of?the?following topic ■ You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant ???evidence ■ You should write at least 250 words | |
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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. | |
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Nowadays people generally think that study is the most important thing in our lives. Some people argue that labor or trip are very helpful to young people who just graduate their high school, while others claim that if they are going to university, students would entrance into school without a gap year. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working or trip experience between highschool and university.
To begin with, there are some advantages of doing something before enter the school. Firstly, young people can get a period of refreshment. Many students are tired from study, because they have been studying over 10 years without any break since became elementary students. So, most adolescence dream get a break after graduate high school, even though they want to go to higher education. Secondly, social experiences are valuable things which cannot learn at schools, and it could be used in university because it is different to highschool, it is an one place of the society. For example, many freshmen are embarrassed about strict university life. If they have some experiences before the enter the university, they would do well than others who do not have any social experience. Therefore, there are a few of benefit of doing something in the gap year.
On the other hand, there are several disadvantages of getting a gap year. The young people waste their time and money, because one year is a quite long period for students. Moreover, If they want to go travel, they have to save the amount of money with working, at that time most students do part time job for a long time that not useful for their career.
Overall, there are some advantages and disadvantages of working or traveling in a gap year. The students can have a break and get some experiences but as result of this, they lost their time and money. | |
제가 쓰고도 참 형편 없는듯...ㅋㅋ
아이디어는 둘째치고 동의어도 계속 쓰고...
근데 알면서도 딱히 방법이 없어설..ㅋㅋ
주제가 youngpeople 관련이라 자꾸 나오다 보니
2,3번 다르게 써도 또 써야되서.. 다른말로 시작 하고 싶어도 안되고
시간도 없고 그래서 disadvantages가 부족하기도 하고
6.5가 목표인데 이정도면 아마 5.5? 넘었으면... 흘흑흑
그리고 토픽에서 장점과 단점만 논하라 그랬는데
멋대로 in my opinion 같은거 쓰고 "난 나가는게 좋다고 생각해" 뭐 이런건 안쓰느니 못한거 맞죠?