문제는 :You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter
Explain why you changed jobs, describe your new job, tell her other news.
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참고로 시간 재고 손으로 썼는데 컴터로 옮긴거에요
Dear Jane,
I'm writing this letter while I'm listening to my favorite songs. It has been cruely cold this winter that I could not even go out to supermarkets near my apartment. How are you doing these days? I hope you haven't got down with cold. Be careful about it. I have heard that it goes (-> lasts) too long.
I wrote this letter to you to announce good news. I moved to another company; a totally different one! As I remember what you have said before, I decided to work at a new company.(repetitive. 지워도 되요) I wasn't really in favor of writing articles in magazines. You know, I always suffered meeting people for interviews, since I got too nervous. It seems that I had a short pulse to hand in my resume after interviewing Mr.Bob (Mr Bob을 interview한게 아니고 Mr Bob이 interviewer 아닌가요?) who treated me awfully. Well, I really did hand it in; to a company where I would work as a copywriter. Weird, isn't it? Being a Journalist and being a copywriter is totally different! These days, I'm busy with loads of work to do. But tillnow, I don't regret on my actions.
Being a copywriter is tough. You have to think of creative ideas for commercials, which is the most difficult part.Also, you get to work in designs for posters which is also a kind of commercials.(awkward) I usually work on posters or radio commercials. Wait untill february the tenth, then you will get to hear my first radio commercial on air!
Oh, and guess what? I've created my own website! I hope you can drop by while surfing the internet. I also made a plan to do drawing again. Now a days, I'm posting my own character (awkward) on that website. In fact, I got a call from a company asking if they can make products with my character illustrations on it. I've been really happy these days since I got to do things that I wanted to do. Jane, call me if you have time to visit seoul. Then I'll buy you a nice lunch. I hope I can see you soon!
Love,_________________
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