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■ You should spend about 20 minutes on this task ■ Write a report for a university lecture, describing the information shown below ■ You should write at least 150 words | |
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Topic : The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
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The graph shows proportion of population aged 65 and over among three countries that are Japan, Sweden, and USA. The graph starts from year of 1940 and ends at 2040 year.
From 1940 to 2020 population of aged 65 and over steadly increasing -> steadily increase in Japan. Percentage of the population in Japan was below ten percent. In 1960 the percentage of over 65 people-> of people over 65 was decreased a little bit and it maintained its rate until it reached 1990. From 1990, it started increasing. About 2030 its percentage was dramtically increasing -> dramatically increased and reached approximately 27 percent in 2040. In 1940, Japan had lowest percentage of over 65 people among three countries, but in 2040, Japan's percentage of over 65 people was larger than any other countries. -> but in 2040, Japan will have the largest percentage among the countries.
Percentage of over 65 people in Sweden and USA were also rapidly increasing from around 2030. USA's percentage of over 65 people contiually increased from 1940 to 1980 and started decreasing a little bit, and then the percentage was increased until 2040. In 1940 USA had largest percentage of over 65 people, but in 2040, USA's percentage of over 65 people was the lowset among three countries.
-> 미래인만큼 2010 부터는 is predicted to increase, is estimated to decrease, will increase, will be decreased 같은 표현을 사용하는게 더 적합하지않나 싶네요 | |
작성하다 보니 150 단어 초과했는데, 150단어 초과한 부분은 지워야 할까요?
-> 150단어라는것은 어느정도 길이로 어느정도 자세하게 작성해야 할것이다에 대한 대략적인 느낌을 주기위한 것으로 크게벗어나지 않는한 상관 없습니다.