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Movie stars became special class in modern society because of their high earning caused from their popularity. There exist some people that who blame the spending customs in luxurious life of stars, considering the biased wealth between them and starving ones. On the other hand, some people claim that such spending habit is acceptable because they are deserved to do so. This essay will present several arguments supporting their right to spend much money.
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Firstly, movie stars are deserved to spend huge amount of cash as a reward for their effort to become a star. Most of entertainers become stars after they try painfully for long time. They train their acting skills, expression methods, body, mind and so on for their acting role and this effort is remarkably distinguishable with other kinds of jobs. During such hard training, they are usually suffered suffer from poor financial status and fear of fail to become a star. Thus, spending lots of money is some kinds of rewards for them because they took high risk to fail,of failing and expecting high return job.
Secondly, there are many stars that who are trying to flatten the situation of unbiased wealth. According to mass communication, some stars regularly donate regularly huge amount of money to the starved in developing countries and even they even visit the poor and share their volunteering effort for long time. This is good virtue which encourages general individuals to pay more attention to the poor. Therefore I think the blames on celebrities using considerable money can be diminished corresponding to their good habit which has great propagation effect to the mass.
To summarize, movie stars tried remarkable effort for their position in now, and many of them spend their property for the poor. Due to a the series of reason, they are the class deserved to make huge spending and this is not a certain kind of privilege. They bravely decided to take high risk for success and are exercising the noble value; noblesse oblige.
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