People who read for pleasure have better imagination and language skills than those who prefer watching TV. To what extent do you agree?
Both reading Reading a book and watching television (다른데에도 다 소문자 시작해주세요~) Television, both are helpful to improve language skills and imagination. Then, which one is more efficient? (지금은 연설문의 대본을 쓰는 과정이 아니기 때문에, 의문문 등은 싹 다 빼주시면 됩니다.) Some people say that reading books or articles is more efficient than watching Television. I totally agree with this idea. This essay will deal with this idea and give my opinion about this. First of all, both of them are good ways to improve language skills and imagination. In case of watching Television, it is also helpful to increase language skills. For example, people can learn language by listening and repeating what the actors say actors saying. Therefore, there is method of learning language which name is ‘Shadowing’. This is the one of the famous ways of learning language. People can learn a language just by repeating what actor’s saying. However, there is big drawback that it is hard to understand the grammar. On the other hand, reading is a good way to learning language skills. Unlike watching Television, people can learn language skills by reading more correctly than watching Television. Furthermore, it is helpful to imagine something. For example, if we read a sentence in the book ‘a man is standing on the road.’, when we read this sentence, we can imagine that his looks are like, the condition of the roads condition, buildings around him and so on. We can imagine and make whatever scenes whatever we want. However, in case of watching Television, we can only just accept scene that Television has shown that. To sum up, When I compare with these two, I can say that reading is more helpful to improve improving language skills and imagination than watching Television. That is why I agree above idea.
시험을 두번 쳤는데 5.5가 나오네요, 목표가 5.5라 상관은 없지만, 혹시라도 5.5보다 떨어지면 안되서 걱정입니다. 감사합니다~
총평: (5/6/6/5) 5.5
일단 5.0 이하의 점수는 진짜 문법이 많이 부족하거나, 내용상 치명적인 문제점이 있는 등의 경우를 제외하면 웬만하면 잘 나오지 않습니다. 지금도 5.0까지 떨어질 각은 보이지 않기 때문에 크게 걱정을 하실 필요는 없어요.
대신 지금 글이 5.5인 이유에 대해 말씀드리자면, 본론 첫 번째 문단이 상당 부분을 차지합니다. 결론적으로 말씀드리자면 해당 문단은 reading을 강조하는 또다른 내용으로 넣어주시면 되고, 자세한 건 밑의 링크에 설명되어있으니 정독해주세요!
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