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It is true that bullying in school has
become an overwhelming social problem making the mental and physical health of children
and adolescents endangered. While this is a serious problem, it can be solved
by limiting the production of a violent media-content and its exposure to
children.
The main cause of the rise in childhood
torturing is that children are easily exposed to violent media-contents and are
vulnerable to accept ideas without rational thoughts. Internet games are
not only aggressive and even cruel but also making kids baffled between reality and the imaginary world. Inability to differentiate the situation lets the
youth to behave as violently as in the game, and significantly hurts friends
mentally and physically. For example, criminals in a school committed by children
and adolescents have been reported mainly due to the mimicking of the behavior
in the game they played.
However, there are solutions to this
problem. One of the ways to foil the exposure to the harmful media is to
regulate the destructive contents of the game and its use of children. Game plots
are hardly censored and released to the young people without strict supervision.
Establishing laws against the production of an intrusive game and its
introduction to children enables kids to avoid an unconditional acceptance of
aggressive behaviors and have time to raise their decisive capabilities enough
to judge the situation.
To sum up, it is clear that uncontrolled restrains
of the combative games are leading children to bully their friend unconsciously.
Nevertheless, the issue can be resolved by the issue of forceful regulations on both the contents of the game and its distribution to the young people.
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