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Nowaday, lots of people around the world think that earning a lot of money cannot be getting much of happiness guarantee happiness. Following this, many people, even the old even old people cannot say the definition of happiness easily. Also, people they do not know what makes the people to feel happy.
To begin with why people are difficult to say about definition about happiness the reason why happiness cannot be defined easily is because, first of all, as there is not an explicit standard like score of when people feel happy. If the standard of happiness is how much money earns, Bill Gates who is the most richest person all around the world would be the most happiest person in the world. However, this statement is not true, consequently, happiness is difficult to define for everyone. Secondly, it depends on the people’s personality and situation when they feel happy. For instance, some people feel so happy when someone buys delicious food like chocolate and pizza to them. In comparison, some people others do not sympathize with them. These people wonder why they feel so happy in this situation.
In spite of difficulties to define happiness, there are a lot of methods for people to become happy so that people become happy person. One of the ways is that finding out some occupation even activity which they really want and doing this job or activity (activity 가 연속해서 쓰이지 않도록 한번 바꿔보세요~). For my case, lots of people told me I would be suited to become a teacher recommend and say to me that ‘You will be suited to become a teacher.’ However, I decided to become a program producer which is was the dream since I was young, and I become became the happiest person because I would choose chose my own path to live. Another way can be that spending a lot of time with somebody who people really liked such as parents, siblings, friends or even relatives. I have a lot of experience which I talked with family or friends about a variety of topics like worrying. These experiences feel calm and more better than before. (이때 내가 행복했다~라고 적는 등의 보완이 필요합니다.)
As mentioned above, despite that happiness is so difficult to define in sentences, most people in the world feel happy. Furthermore, doing something whatever you want and spending a lot of time with people you liked much is helpful to feel happy. (여기는 despite 구조를 사용하실 필요가 없습니다. 그냥 행복이 정의하기 어려운 이유, 그리고 어떻게 하면 행복해질지에 대해 despite 없이 딱 두 문장으로 마무리히저어주세요~) |