You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The figure illustrates the process of the production of ethanol fuel from corn.
In general, there There are nine stages in the process, and it required not only corn but also water. (다이어그램 유형에서는 단계의 수와 함께, 시작과 끝 단계를 from~to 의 형식으로 적어주시면 됩니다.)
The process starts with storing corn. Before the corn is cooked, it goes through the milling. Then, it is cooked with water for 4 hours. After cooking, cooked corn is fermented for 48 hours long and it is separated to two which are liquid and solid by-product. To produce ethanol fuel, only liquid is used, not the solid by-product. With the liquid, which is ethanol, has to purify for 5 hours. (여기의 경우 수동으로 바꿔주세요! 다이어그램 유형에서 가장 중요한 사항은 수동태입니다.) The purified ethanol goes through the storing process and is finally transported.
총평: (7/7/6/6) 6.5
쉬운 표였던 만큼, 내용상 두 번째 문단을 제외하고는 크게 문제는 없었습니다. 다이어그램 유형에서는 항상 수동태에 신경써주시고, Overview를 작성할 때 흔히 말하는 '국룰'은 단계 수 + 시작과 끝 단계라고 보시면 되겠습니다.
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