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Nowadays buying more
products has long been an issue of concern and interest to people. Regarding
this issue, some people claim it plays a detrimental impact on society.
However, I strongly disagree with this statement and the detailed reasons will
be shared in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, if
people consume a large amount of products, economy of the society will be active.
For example, sellers or buyers will not earn much money when rich people only save
their salaries in the bank. Then, the gap between poor and wealth people will
be created more significantly. However, when consumers bought a great deal of
products like jewelries, cars and even clothes, economy on the society will be
apparently cycled. This is why the governments suggest to people to buy many
products.
On the other hand,
there is another merit by consuming more products on the society. The rate of unemployment
will be decreased when people buy more and more products. For instance, if demands
for many products rise, supplies for them will naturally increase. In this
process, a large number of factories and companies which produce stuffs will
search people who do not have a profession to make products and satisfy
consumers. As a result, the rate of unemployment which is one of the most
serious problems in many countries today will be declined.
In conclusion, as I
mentioned above, I believe that there are several advantages which are activation
of economy and decline of unemployment on society when people consumed more
products.
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