Some people think that introducing new technology would improve the quality of life of people in developing countries. Others believe it is free education that improves quality of life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There are many factors that make people to have advanced the quality of life in developing countries. Some people argue that new technology is important to make industrialization, while others assume that free education is the fastest way to improve quality of life. I will discuss both views and I personally believe that education is making life better and fast.
First of all, our society has been developed fast through the various technologies and people’s life is much more comfortable and safe than before. For example, nowadays, technologies of building have been advanced not only design side but also practical side which could not in the past. Constructors establish buildings by considering natural disasters like earthquakes. Depends on the frequency natural disasters in their countries, they use different technologies. Therefore, it would be helpful for developing countries if developed countries introduce some new technologies.
On the other hand, some people think free education is most important because they know about just few so people who are in developing countries do not know what to do first. However, through free education, they can learn whatever they want and they might find interest field that they want to try to be. Moreover, they realize some things through free education, someone might bring huge changes their own country positively. I think it is important that people should realize what they want because that is motivation for making better life.
In conclusion, it is very helpful for developing countries that introducing new technology in short-terms, however, in the long-terms through the education, each person should realize what they want to be because it is the strength that people keep doing that.
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