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The line graph and bar chart give information concerning the percentage of election participation by age, gender, and income from 1990 to 2010. (Japan 이라는 단어도 추가되어야 합니다.)
Overall, the percentage of participation became higher as the age group of participants participants grow older, while this rate declined when people earn more money. In addition, the gap of voting participation between males and females became decreasing decreased throughout the period.
Looking at the chart more closely, the percentage of election participation (문단에 한 번 쯤은 지금과 같이 무엇에 대한 비율인지 명확히 해주는 게 좋습니다.) of people more than 51 years old showed the highest numbers among that of other age groups from 50% in 1990 to 68% in 2010. Interestingly, the figure of people from 21 to 30 years old overtook the figure from 31 to 40 at 55% in 1997. In the case of gender, the gap between men and women were 50% (percentage point 로 표현해주셔야 합니다.) in 1990. This gap shrunk as the participation of females increased to 50% in 2010. (이 문장이 더욱 효과적으로 전달되기 위해서는, 이 앞 문장에서 50 percentage points 의 격차를 보였을 때 남녀 수치가 각각 어땠는지를 적어주시는 게 좋습니다.)
Moreover, people who earned money less than $20,000 participated in election the most among other income groups. The figure was more than 60% throughout the period. Meanwhile However, it is noticeable that people who earned money more than $60,000 showed the least percentage of participation, which figure never surpassed 20% between 1990 and 2010.
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