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Online education market has been dramatically increased since 1990’s.
The internet makes it possible to learn something whenever we want and search the information whatever we want to know by just one click the mouse. It is viewed as a useful alternative way of dealing with certain information. Some people believe that it is far better than study in the classroom and some people say that it is only useful to get when getting the information.
Some people believe that the online education will become a major source of studying in the near future because of its advantages for those who want to study. Students have different intellectual capacity, thus they can choose the course that they can understand the contents. It will be more efficient way to learn something. In addition, they can study again same contents again if they don’t understand what it means. Further, we can study through the online anyplace we want because of cutting-edge electric electronic devices such as smart phone, potable media player
I believe that it will be impossible that online education replaces teacher in the class room although even though it has many advantages.
If we think that education means only get the receiving information, maybe online education is more efficient way than studying in the classroom with the teachers. In my opinion, studying in the class room with friends and teachers means not only get the information but also learn many things. For example, such as friendships, attitude, and social ability. and Also, I believe that teachers have most important roles in the class as much as students’ parents.
In my conclusion, students will be happy if they meet the good teachers. It is more important than getting the certain fact or information in the class.
Education doesn’t mean only just learning Mathematics and Science. Thus, teachers never disappear in the class as well as education exists.
I believe that meeting the good teachers is one of the great experiences.
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