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How do you think of capital punishment? Should we acknowledge this law without any disagreement? In these days, a lot of crimes have been committing.committed. And Also(And를 문장 시작할 때 쓰는건 좋지 않아요) some people think that there are some problems when the judge sentences the punishment, that is to say, capital punishment.
First of all, this law is so unfair that many people can't understand it. For example, we can see that it is
easy for the rich to get free from their crime, because of capital punishment.(불필요) They are rich enough to pay for it. For this reason, sometimes they probably think that breaking the law is easy. So Therefore(So를 문장 시작할때 쓰는건 좋지 않아요) it could be the problems. In comparison to the poor, we can feel that this is unfair. They don't have enough money to pay for it. So Therefore they have no option but to go to the jail. As a result, it goes without saying that this law is unfair.
Secondly, some people who committed crime at least once tend to go on committing a crime. So Therefore if these people were released from the jail by the money, they wouldn't feel anything, Let's say, guilt. So Therefore this has they have a potential to commit a crime again. Virtually, we often read articles that are related to criminal who did a crime many times.
In my opinion, if it goes on, the similar crimes will keep happening. In conclusion, we have to remove this law as soon as possible in order to prevent similar crime and keep justice.
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