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The provided charts illustrate the projection of jean sales of two companies at the next year in Turkey and the expectation of the market share between Mango company and Jack & Jones company about jeans in the end of the next year.
Overall, it is clear that the corporation named (생략 가능합니다.) Jack & Jones will record much higher sales than the corporation named Mango in next year except in July and August. Also, the part of ‘Others’ made up the biggest of the chart. In comparison, Mango corporation was the least part of the market share at the end of the next year. (여기도 시제를 미래로 맞춰주세요~)
To be more specific, in January, Jack and Jones will sell over 400 thousands of pairs which will four time as many as Mango company. This status will continue until June. Surprisingly (Task 1을 작성할 때에는 가치 판단이 들어가는 단어를 사용하지 말아주세요~), the consumers will buy 400 thousands of pairs in the Mango store in July, making it slightly less sell than buying under 400 thousands of pairs in the Jack & Jones company (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.). However, in the end of the year, the trend will return that the company of Mango will sell approximately 900 thousands of pairs as opposed to the company of Jack & Jones will sell around 600 thousands of pairs.
Moving onto the pie chart, the ‘others’ part took up half of the total proportion. Moreover, Jack & Jones accounted for 30% while Mango made up 20% of the market share. (여기도 시제를 수정해주시고, 또한 표 문제에서 '기타' 가 있으면 이에 대해 언급하지 않는 것이 가장 좋습니다. 그러나 여기의 경우 무시하기에는 수치가 조금 크죠. 이럴 때 대처 방법으로는, 문장 내에서의 비중을 최대한 축소하는 것이 있습니다. 예를 들면, '기타 브랜드를 제외하고 Jack&Jones 는~~~' 와 같이 서술하는 방법이죠.) |