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Both diagrams illustrate how the Grange Park looks like in 1920 and now. Overall, everythings in the garden has been (지금처럼 현재의 표가 비교군으로 주어져있는 경우에 한해서는 변화를 다루는 시제는 현재완료로 써주시면 됩니다. 다른데에도 다 바꿔주세요!) are changed except one rose (싹 다 소문자 시작입니다.) Rose garden which is located in the left side of the entrance in Arnold Avenue avenue. First of all, in Grange Park park in 1920, there was a fountain in the middle of the garden which is now replaced to the Rose garden. There were three Rose gardens in 1920. Two of these are located in both sides of the entrance at Arnold avenue. The other one is located in left side of the entrance in Eldon street. However, the Rose garden is now located in the middle of the garden which is surrounded by four areas of (기존 표현은 의자 자체가 4개였다는 의미이므로 적절하지 않습니다.) seats. There were five seats in 1920. Four of them were spreaded in four corners of left side in the garden. The other one was between the Pond for water plants and Glasshouse. This spot is now used as Entrance(얘네도 소문자 시작입니다.) for underground car park. In the middle of the left side, there was a stage for musicians in 1920. Now it is turned to Amphitheatre (여기 포함, 이 문단에 대문자로 시작한 애들도 Eldon Street 제외 싹 다 소문자 시작이고요. 단, 문장의 첫 단어는 당연히 예외입니다.) for concerts in a round shape. On the left side in Amphitheatre, there are seats for the audience and on the other side there is a stage. Now there is a Water feature on the right side of the entrance in Eldon Street street where used to be the place for Glasshouse in 1920. Cafe and Children’s play area are facing the Water feature. However, this location was for Rose garden and Pond for water plants in 1920.
지난시험 6.0, 목표점수는 7.0입니다. 그림으로 과거와 현재를 비교해야하는 경우 어떻게 글을 배치하는 것이 효과적으로 적는 것인지 잘모르겠네요 ㅠㅠ
-> 이거는 무조건 지도별로 가시면 됩니다. 즉, 서론-Overview-1920-현재 의 4문단으로 잡아주시면 됩니다.
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