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Nowadays, into due to the development of technology, most of people work in their home and their workplace with using robot such as by using their computers. I think that it brings a positive effect to modern people due to the reasons below as show below.
Firstly, with the development of technology, there is no denying that we can work more effectively and easily. society for technological Technological development has enabled made us to finish work more easily. Also, technology does not have limits and does not make mistakes to work and dose not have mistake. In this regard, technology is sometimes more better than human beings working. So I think that such a as the development is a big benefit for modern people because technology brings more time and convenience (얘가 명사형입니다.) convenient to modern people. In additional, in a busy modern society, it is enormously a big advantage.
Secondly, development of technology is effective to work in time of contagious diseases nowadays, many people lose their work and difficult to work due to corona virus. (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다. 초록색은 다 댓글 주세요!) In this situation, a lot of people use online course and online work and they work on the Internet (인터넷은 고유명사이므로 대문자 시작입니다.)at the internet. Such as way is effective to modern social people not to get virus. Also, development of technology has brought convenient (명사형으로 쓰셔야 합니다.) to us. For example, we can pay with a mobile phone easily instead going bank and we can order what we need easily with the internet. In this regard, I in this regard, i believe that development of technology is big benefit to us.
In conclusion, there is no denying that many people work with the latest robot and technology in their home or their workplace and it is a big benefit for us. This is because Because it gives convenient convenience to many people and we can solve problems more easily at home. |