Some people teach their children to try hard enough to achieve what they want. There are some advantages and disadvantages on this issue. I believe that this issues should be worth to be debated in society. (초록색은 밑에서 말씀드리겠습니다.)
The reason why some parents push their children to study without playing is because only study not playing anything was they believe that it's (줄임말은 풀어써주셔야 합니다. 다른데에도 마찬가지이고요.) the best way to raise children. Even though the children try to understand why their parents do like this, they can compared with other families whose the ways to take care of their children are totally different ways. (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) Fianlly, the children tend to give up trying hard at least. Then their academic performance would not be should be not good enough to go to any universities after graduating from high schol.
On the other hand, if parents don't look after anything about their children, the children can also get in trouble living with the immutural thoughts. Even if they should feel free right away, there is no way to learn to be mutural as a good adult who can earn money to use, have high self-esteem, and make the a right desisions. While growing up raising with their parents, children are needed to take care of themselves with love and wisdom.
In conclusion, When when looking at some counseling reports, there are some families who has problems one another about communication these days. the more parents only force their children live to do their best, the more the children tend to give up everything. So as parents whose cultures that parents let their children to live hard to live more comtable later, they also need to learn how to raise their children in right ways.
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