Some people think that universities should use their funds to support social activities for students.
Others think that this money should be used to improve the food at university cafeterias.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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In school, some people think that universities should use funds to support students' social activities. However, I and others think the money should be used to improve the cafeteria's food.
When students enter university, many students support and join social activities such as clubs. Social activities provide students with mental and physical rest from studying. Students argue that some people should sponsor social activities because they relieve stress through these social activities. For example, when I was in college, my college club activity was a travel club, and it gave me pleasure to travel all over the country every week, also it was able to make a better trip with the support of the school. which made students and me forget their studies and relieve their stress.
On the other hand, most college students actively use school cafeterias. Because the school cafeteria is much cheaper than other restaurants outside the school. So many students argue that school restaurants should be improved because they provide students with financial benefits. Because if universities provide high-quality food, students can eat on campus and save money. According to a survey of my school cafeteria, more than 90 percent of the students said they were willing to pay more to eat outside if the quality of the cafeteria was poor.
In conclusion, universities may be good for many students to use funds to support social activities. however, in my opinion, it is more effective to improve school cafeterias where students can receive direct financial benefits.
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