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People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less.
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One of the reasons that they (문단에 처음 등장하는 대상이 대명사로 쓰여서는 안 됩니다.) drink more and more sugar-based beverage is because the sugar gives energy and makes people feel better. For example, water does not have any sugar, so it cannot give any some sort of energy to people. However, compared to water, soda gives us energy after people drink it. Moreover, in the hot summer, cool beverage with sugar is like an oasis to people on the street. It is even tastes good. The second Second reason is that it is easy to get or buy sugar-based drinks in anywhere no matter it may be inside or outside. There are lots of cafes and stores on the street and people can buy any drinks they want in there.
The solution for this problem is that people tried for people to try drink beverage which is more healthier. For example, the soda only has have sugar, but orange juice have has some nutrients like vitamin from fruit, so even they have the same amount of sugar, orange juice is healthier than soda. Not only fruit juice like orange juice is the option. Fruit smoothies can be another healthier juice than the others.
In conclusion, the reasons that people drink more and more sugar-based beverage with sugar-based are because sugar makes people energetic and feel good, and it is easy to buy them anywhere. The solution Solution for this problem is for people to should try to drink healthier drinks like fruit juice or a smoothie because although even it has same sugar with soda, it has more nutrients that are good to the that is good in human body.
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