Q. the government should sometimes infringeon people’s freedom for the security of society.
To what extent do you agree or disagreewith this statement?
It is a common belief that the governmentshould limit on people’s freedom for the security of contemporary society. Ipartially believe that people can protect from danger.
First and foremost, the government shouldlimit time of pub and club for people’s safety. This is because people usuallydrive when they drink some alcohol. It is evident that the biggest problem iseven people have a driver license, they just ignore policies. In a recentsurvey, people who have had car accidents from heavy drinker drasticallyincreased. Also, people who drink a lot of alcohol did criminal like hurt anddie. This is clearly show that people should be safe from danger all the time,so the government make limit closing time of pub and club.
However, I believe that people keep safety intheir life without the government intervention. Because people learned how tokeep the rule since they were young. In addition, if the government make closinghours any store for safety, it would be big problem to merchandiser and workerwho working during the night. A recent published show illustrated that in Brazil,the government made one of the policies to limit closing hours of store. Thus,the store owner affected to bankruptcy. Therefore, it is clear show that the governmentshould not make regulation to people’s freedom in modern society.
To sum up, the government should infringe onpeople’s life for safety. However, I personally believe that it is moreessential people can keep safety themselves.
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