Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Write at least 250 words.
It is a common belief that sharing the important information with other people is helpful to live their life.
However, there is a more persuasive argument that sometimes sharing the most important things can negatively effect has negatively effected to people in our society. It is the freedom of individuals whether they want to give them information or not. There are some of people who don't (줄임말은 풀어써주셔야 합니다. 다른데에도 다 풀어주세요!) want to freely share something with people whom they don't know.
On the one hand, in case of disasters such as an earthquake, contagious diseases, or an occurrence of occurring the war in the country, these are the biggest issues that we have to follow the instruction of government. For example, research has shown that sharing the place of sexual murders who live with neighborhoods could prevent committing the crime from them. Moreover, in fields of scientific research, business and medical it has became beneficial to make people to live well as society changes.
Nevertheless, I support the idea that it needs to reduce uncertain information. (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) Nowadays, since the internet culture has been developed, people can search what it that they don't know on the internet using google, wikipedia and so on. There are so many fake and untested information on these websites. For instance, according to a recent newspaper, the vaccine of influenza might kill the normal people having a shot. There are no reasons why they were killed from anything. As a result, because the most of citizens believed that the vaccine of influenza can kill a person, some of people have still refused to get the vaccine.
To sum up, while it is apparent that people can gain valuable information more easily throughout sharing it freely, it is undeniable that they can have a negative impact on them by having information which is incorrect.
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