While it is often said that losing species
of plants and animals is main environmental problems, other insist that there
are a number of significant important environmental issues. However, I would
contend that there are some important environmental issues such as disaster and
pollutions.
To begin with, there are a couple of
reasons why the loss of plants and wild animals can bring considerable damage
in our life. First and foremost, people can not ear balanced diet, if there are
not enough plants and animals. For example, if people only eat particular food
on every day, the health level of our community may decline. This is because,
if we do not eat balanced diet, this impact on our immune system. Moreover,
losing huge number of plants and animals can negative effect in our life. To
illustrate, if the number of plants decrease continually, other species can also
affect by this situation, such as herbivores. Finally, human can be exposed to
negative impact on their lives.
On the other hand, despite opposite
mentioned above, there are more convincing arguments that pollutions and
disasters mare more drawbacks on the environment. First of all, these days,
most people suffer from a number of pollutions. In other words, air pollution
is common in the cities. This can make people to stress out. In fact, stress is
one of the causes of the illnesses, because it weakens the immune system. In
addition, disasters also significant environmental issues. To be specific,
people can not expect disasters in the near future. Therefore, life quality of
our citizens may decline. This is because, people can always concern about
disasters like hurricanes, floods, and forest fires.
In conclusion, even though losing some plants and animals may bring about some negative impacts it is clear that disaster and pollutions will be more detrimental. Hence, people should try to prevent some negative impacts from the environment.
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