Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen the pressure on the world’s fuel resources.
The world is more and more facing the lack of fuel resources. Following this, fuel prices are going up as well. Some people think that keep rasing oil prices can help saving the existing fuel for the future, others think that the change of the prices of fuels can not be the fundemental solution. I agree with the latter opinion.
The reason being is that even though there will be a huge difference between raising the oil price and not, such as some poor people who can not afford expensive oil price might not able to fill up the gas for their cars and therefore will eventually give up on their cars, but it is just a hypothesis. The majority of people will still purchase gas for their cars and oil for their houses’ heating systems. It is basically impossible to not make people use less oil or gas by increasing the prices. In addition, increasing oil prices may cause equality and human rights issues. Because increasing oil prices will just burden the poor, not the rich.
Besides, thanks to the advanced science and technologies, many countries are developing nature-friendly resources to replace limited nature resources, such as cars that are run by hydrogen and electricity. By promoting and encouraging people to use these rather than traditional fuel, the consumption of fuels will naturally slow down.
Therefore, governments and people, not only the poor, but also the rich, need to be more aware of using eco-friendly resources to lessen the burdens on our world. Because saving our world is an important job for everyone in the world. (268, 남은시간: 7:37 )
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