The bar chart shows the amount of export earnings in various categories and the table shows the percentage of change in values from 2015 to 2016.
Overall, most products’ export earnings
increased over 2years (띄어주셔야 합니다.), with an exception of excepting gems and jewellery. The exports of textiles Textiles increased
gradually while agricultural products rose up the least. Petroleum products shows the highest exports is
the highest over 2 years.
Textiles export rise up sharply, 15.24%, and the
export earning was over 30billions 30 billion (다른데에도 다 이렇게 바꿔주시면 됩니다. s안 들어가니까 주의해주세요!) dollars in 2016 while it was about
25billions dollars in 2015. Although it increased the most, it is still the
lowest among five categories in 2016. Petroleum products, occupying the highest
rate in both years, increased by 3%. The export of engineered goods rose up 8.5%
and earning exceeded 60billions dollars in 2016. Agricultural products went up
just only 0.81% and it became almost equal to textiles in 2016.
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