Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen the pressure on the world’s fuel resources.
The world is more and more facing the lack of fuel resources. Following this, fuel prices are going up as well. Some people think that keep continuously raising rasing oil prices can help save saving the existing fuel for the future, while others think that the change of the prices of fuels can not be the fundemental solution. Personally, I agree with the latter opinion.
The reason being is that even though there will be a huge difference between raising the oil price and not, such as some poor people who can not afford expensive oil price might not able to fill up the gas for their cars and therefore will eventually give up on their cars, but it is just a hypothesis. (이 문장은 너무 깁니다. 이로 인해 전달하고자 하는 바가 정확하게 들어오지 않는 상황이고요. 99%의 학생들에게 있어 문장이 길어지는 것은 곧 문법 오류로 이어질 뿐이기 때문에 철저하게 짧게 끊어가주셔야 합니다.) The majority of people will still purchase gas for their cars and oil for their houses’ heating systems. It is basically impossible to not make people use less oil or gas by increasing the prices. In addition, increasing oil prices may cause equality and human rights issues. This is because Because increasing oil prices will just burden only the poor, not the rich.
Besides, thanks to the advanced science and technologies, many countries are developing nature-friendly resources to replace limited nature resources, such as cars that are run by hydrogen and electricity. By promoting and encouraging people to use these rather than traditional fuel, the consumption of fuels will naturally slow down. (윗 문단을 간추리면서 여기 문단을 조금 늘려주시면 좋습니다.)
Therefore, governments and people, not only the poor, but also the rich, need to be more aware of using eco-friendly resources to lessen the burdens on our world. This is because Because saving our world is an important job for everyone in the world. (이 문단의 경우 제일 중요한 '기름값이 증가는 근본적인 해결책이 아니다~' 라는 문장, 혹은 이와 유사한 내용의 문장이 들어가야 합니다.) (268, 남은시간: 7:37 )
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