주제: people should only comcetrate on a single skill for life because it is the best way to succeed. to what extent do you agrree or disagree with this opinion?
It is a common belief that the best way to succeed only has a single talent for life. However, I firmly believe that people should focus on learning various skills to earn a lot of money and build many careers for their success.
To begin with, having diverse skills would have an opportunity to build their new career. This is because it can gain many promotion chances and apply for jobs you used to be unqualified for. For example, according to one study on job in Korea, it appears that people who are interested in various abilities can get a chance on job interviews and move to job that required new skills when people cannot work in their company or the society has crisis such as corona-virus.
On top of that, acquiring a plenty of ability give people to earn money than people who have only one talent. Keeping consistent one ability has a narrow choice on job. It means that the way how to earn a lot of money is also no widen. For example, according to the recent research what abilities people gain a lot of money for one month in Europe, it show that people achieved two or more skills use their talent or combined each skills to make a lot of salary than person of one skill.
Overall, it clear that concentrating on diverse skills is able to help people to be more successful person by making many careers and earning a lot of money. For these reason, people need to focus on leaning one or more skills.
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