Some people believe that rich countries should provide poorer countries with help that is not financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The gap of the rich and the poor is not just problematic between people, it also brings various conflicts between countries. Co-connected mechanizm covering the Earth has been applied to every country, so the growth of rich countries is inevitably cause downsides to developing countries. UN and other global institutes want to solve that problem and recommend rich countries to help or hive aid to poorer countries. Then, the important question is occurred; is financial help is more effective than other forms of assistance? I strongly agree that poorer countries can get so much benefits by various other forms of aid, not to mention that giving financial help can cause conflict in poorer countries.
"If you truly care about someone, teach them how to catch a fish instead of give them already captured one." Like the old saying, providing money itself is inefficiant for one's self-growing. The purpose of global aid is make poor countries richer and make a minimum level of lifestyle. There are so many forms of ways to help poorer countries besides of financial aid; send teachers, give an infrastructure, educate new skills, etc.
For instance, sending teachers from rich countries with a high quality of teaching skills will upgrade overall status of school system in poorer countries. Well-educated students who take benefits from good teachers can study more about technology, mathematics or other helpful subjects, the possibility of making adequate workforce goes up, and finally they can be a long-term advantages of their country. Moreover, building an infrastructure can be an another form of efficient way to help. From time to time, some corporations willingly make a bridge, public water system, railway, or other structures to poor countries and it became an actual help to people immediately, in addition it also can be a chance to solve an unemployment issue. Rich countries can do exact same thing and it is definitely way better than just give them money.
Finance is not unimportant, but there are other ways that provide more instance help. Giving financial aid has lot of possibility that just make the vested interests in poor country wealthier. Hence, I believe that rich countries should provide in multiple ways but financial one.
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