It is a common belief that people who focus on a single skill for their whole life should succeed. However, I firmly believe that people should get more than two techniques to get success because they do not know what will be happened in the future. And (문장을 and but so로 시작하는 것은 좋지 못합니다만......사실 6.0에서 그리 중요하지는 않습니다.)) also, if people learn many skills, they could use them in cooperative ways.
To begin with, people should have more than 2 techniques to keep their life in peace. Life is too long to maintain with just one skill. Moreover, most people do not know what will be happened in the future, and they are not able to guess that. Let’s suppose that someone is a pianist who has spend his life only for playing the piano. If he got injured his finger his fingers are injured and could not play the piano anymore, he would have to choose another work. To prepare for this awful situation, he should get one more ability.
On the top of that, it would be useful if you (2인칭을 쓰는 것 역시 별로 좋지는 않지만...이 역시 6.0에서 중요한 사항은 아닙니다.) learn more than 2 skills. Some skills can be used in cooperative ways. For example, if someone wants to open a the cafe and he or she has the licenses of baking and making coffee, both of them would be helpful to develop his cafe. Also some companies want to hire people who have useful licenses such as powerpoint, excel, word and photoshop.
To sum up, having more than 2 techniques would help people to prepare their whole life and could use them in cooperative ways. For these reasons, people should have more skills than a single one to succeed.
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감사합니다!
총평: (6/6/6/6) 6.0
6.5로 가기에는 조금 힘들겠지만, 반대로 5점대 떨어질 가능성은 그보다 더 낮습니다. 고로 이정도만 시간 내에 쓰실 수 있도록 유지해주시면 되고, 이 외에 task1 역시 최소한으로만 챙겨주시면 되겠습니다. 어차피 시험까지도 많이 남았으니까, 그냥 부담없이 편하게 공부하셔도 돼요. (자만은 절대 안 됩니다!)
수고하셨습니다 :)