technology 주제입니다.
감사합니다!
(혹시 conclusion이 너무 간단한가요?)
1) Many things that used to be done in
the home by hands are now being by machines.
Does this development bring more
advantages or disadvantages?
Owing to immense technological progress of mankind, most of house works are done by machines. This change brought about some drawbacks, but it mostly has had a positive effect on both individuals and our society.
In terms of disadvantage, using machine in the
house tend to make people too rely on them. People in these days do not have chance
to learn good housework skills due to popularity and convenience of machines. For
example, unlike the past, many unique family recipes are thought to be obsolete
and vanished because people in these days prefer simple and convenient cooking method
with machines such as an air fryer and oven-ready foods.
On the other hand, this change has brought about
many positive changes on both individuals and a society. First of all, people are
receiving benefits from housework automation by machines such as wash machines and
dish washers. As these machines are certainly convenient and time saving, people
can have more free time spending more time with family or doing more creative and
productive works. Furthermore, using machines in the home have brought about a number
of positive changes on our society by enabling more women to participate in social
and economic activities than before. In the past, most of women cannot have jobs
because they have to play a lot of roles in the house. However, thanks to relevant
machines, women finally become free from all the household chores and able to have
various jobs. This has increased not only women’s social status but also their country’s
workforce.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above,
It can be seen that the disadvantages of using machines in the home are relatively
small than its benefits.