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The illustrated pie charts outline the production of
units’ electricity by five different energy sources in A brief analysis of charts unfolds that while coal was the largest fuel source throughout the given span in Australia, nuclear power dominated the total production in the end in France. Of Australia,
the total production in the beginning was 100 units and half of units were
coal. Slices of Hydro power and natural gas depict the same unit, 20, and the
rest of 10 units consist of oil. After 20 years, the total units grew up to 170. While
the supply of coal explosively ramped up by 80 from 50 units and that of
hydro power also escalated to 36 from 20 units, other energy sources
significantly shrunk to 2 units each and no nuclear power use is observed in
both charts. Considering
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감사합니다.
총평: 잘 적어주시긴 했는데, 지금의 경우 몇 사항을 생략하더라도 '1980년의 프랑스는 비교적 고른 분포를 보인 반면' 의 내용이 들어가야 합니다. 이것 정도만 좀 봐주시면 괜찮을 거에요.
수고하셨습니다 :)