Some people say that it is fair for each group member to be given the same grade after a group project.
Other think that different grades should be allocated based on the level of contribution.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays it has been always argued problem that wether each group member to received it has been argued whether each group member should be given the same score after a team project or not. Some people say that it is unfair to be given different grades in the same group. I do disagree with this view and will Will discuss two opposite ideas about this tackle.
On the other hand, some people assert that it is does not make a sense that people in the same team should be given different scores had a different score each member. This is because all members are in one team members is one of the member in one team, and they took part in project such as an assignment wether they try to themselves or not. (여기는 댓글 주세요! 앞으로 초록 문장들은 항상 댓글 주시면 됩니다.)
On the flips side, others believe that it is certainly unfair for all members to receive the same scores all members. Actually, there are the differences in each participant’s effort and they have a different role in the group. Take an example, students have a different part and work when students do their team homework, and one of the students should lead to this team. What is more, the team leader plays a vital role in team such as the leader should always bringing connect and bring together from each student, and its this task is quite hard. If all participants had a same grade, this phenomenon would lead to wrong behavior such free-riding as free-rider for participants, and they would be able to do same things when they take part in team event or project.
To sum up, despite the fact that participants take part as in one team and do their tasks, their contribution are not the same and it will be possible to make free-riders at times. For these reasons, I firmly concur that people could be given their score differently depending on their own contribution.
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