The given bar chart illustrates the results
of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five
Australian cities.
Overall, it is evident that Australians who
live in certain cities bought fresh coffee in the last 4 weeks the least. Also, the
percentage of people who went to a café to drink coffee of tea in the last 4 weeks
more was the highest.
Looking at the bar chart more closely, one
can see that the percentage of people who live in Brisbane and Adelaide bought
fresh coffee in last 4 weeks was the lowest at around 34 percent respectively, while
that of Sydney citizens was the highest at approximately 44 percent. There were
people who live in Brisbane and Hobart, and they bought instant coffee in last
4 weeks at around 53 percent and 54 percent, which showed were higher percentage than
other cities, Sydney, Melbourne, and Adelaide. In addition, the rate of Adelaide
residents who went to a café for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks was the smallest
at less than 50 percent, while the figures of Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart
residents were more than 60 percent. (사실 7~9점 기준으로는 문장 구조가 제한적인 상황입니다. 그러나 7점 필요하신 게 아니니까 그냥 넘기세요! 오히려 지금처럼 쓰는 게 훨씬 안정적입니다.)
추석 전부터 쉬고 이제 다시 시작하니 시간이 또 걸리네요 오랜만에 바 그래프도 해보고ㅜㅜㅜ
아휴 23분 정도 걸렸어요ㅠㅠㅠ
총평: (7/7/6/6) 6.5
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